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Post by Teh Wozzinator on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:39 pm

Do you have a good first chapter or prologue to a story? Post it here, and I will review and find a winner! This is for the best beginning of a story--not just a short story!

I will have first and second place winners, and I will give each a critique on their contest entry.

Rules: Post a link to your story in this topic. Stories MUST be on POP. Any genre allowed--but no storybook beginnings. No artwork, unless it's a graphic novel beginning. NO R-rated stories, I will read anything that is rated G, PG, or PG-13. This contest will end March 25th, which is when I will read the stories. ONLY ONE ENTRY ALLOWED.

Any questions? Post them here, as well as your link!

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Post by Mark on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:44 pm

I'm in! This sounds great. I can never do openings.

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Teh Wozzinator on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:45 pm

The Immortals was good! Although I will admit that I liked #12 better than #1... and a few others. Still, they all get a gold star in my book. Smile

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Mark on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:46 pm

No! This is my 100th post! lol, you beat me...

I think I improved along the way... I might use this as a chance to rewirte my chapter one! Hehe!

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Saruukhai on Fri Mar 07, 2008 12:44 am

Well I have a beginning of a story I'm writing, I'm almost 1/4 the way through at the moment and the beginning is really short, about 1000 words. I find it better that I do the rest of the story firs tthen come back to the beginning while I'm revising my work. I admit its not very good but unfortunetly its the best I have at present Crying or Very sad

I'll post it when I get your approval; you do things that no one wants then bam, in your face.
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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Teh Wozzinator on Fri Mar 07, 2008 12:49 am

What do you mean, my approval?

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Saruukhai on Sat Mar 08, 2008 2:04 am

Most forums I go to I get flamed / suspended / banned without permission of posting something big or sometimes posting at all my opinions or thoughts or basically anything that involves me speaking
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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Teh Wozzinator on Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:32 am

Ah. Don't worry, you won't get in trouble for posting anything! (If you want to enter, could you please post the link in this thread?)

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Post by Saruukhai on Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:04 pm

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Mark on Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:53 pm

OK, here's mine:

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Teh Wozzinator on Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:52 pm

Thanks for the entries, but I do need more! I can't do this with just two... I may have to extend the contest length, or let people submit more than one. I'm not sure.

I've read both of the entries, and they're both very good.

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Mark on Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:57 pm

The ending is still 16 days away, you've already had 2 in 3 days. Very Happy

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Re: Best Beginning! (Ends March 25th)

Post by Teh Wozzinator on Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:00 pm

Yeah, but there aren't very many people on the site.

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Post by Mark on Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:01 pm

Fair point...

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Post by Teh Wozzinator on Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:02 pm

Very Happy Oh, definitely!

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